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Malik reached into the grubby paper bag, a shudder running through his arm as his fingers touched the slim plastic tube within. Eyes closed, he carefully gripped the object, drew it from the bag, and opened his eyes to look upon it as it lay across his palm. It was odd, he thought, how such miraculous power could be contained in so small and simple a vessel. But then, he pondered as he reflexively flipped the slim shaft to its most comfortable angle, does the innocuous nature of the conduit not make the power that flows through it all the more... insidious? Surreptitious? He'd find a word later. Now, it was just him and his work.

It took a moment for his out-of-practise fingers to become accustomed to the way the flimsy cylinder spat its contents onto the white handmade paper, but when the fast, spidery script began making its way across the page, the words flowed forth like water from a burst dam: impeded in its quest for far too long, every drop, every atom of the fluid yearning and aching to find its way to the sea from which it had been kept. For years, the people and places, the legends and songs, the plants and animals, all had been trapped within the great simmering vat that was Malik's imagination, but now that they had a way out, they were pouring out of him, becoming solid in the form of words and letters, phrases and sentences, the paragraphs and chapters inexorably filling the reams of paper, that had taken days to craft, in a matter of hours. And still he was not finished.

He began writing on whatever he could find: old food wrappers, scraps of cardboard packaging, the blank backs of the legal records and government documents that were scattered around his house. As he wrote and wrote, concerns for his well-being were left floundering, far from the forefront of his mind. For over two days he neither washed nor ate, he didn't drink except for the occasional sip of coffee, and his eyes never closed except to blink the sweat of his exertions from his eyes Finally, he carefully scratched out the last words of his work across the blank reverse of some canvas that had once hung on his wall, the landscape twisting and distending as it was distorted by the efforts of the much-used nib. With the dying strokes of his apparatus, Malik shaped the final letter of the final sentence of his masterpiece, and heaved a long and heartfelt sigh. Hands trembling, he shuffled the massive heap of writing material into something vaguely resembling order, sat down in his rickety wooden chair, closed his eyes, and waited for the men to come.


It began with shouting. "Malik Oberon, this is the police. You are charged with unauthorised possession of a writing instrument. If you do not open the door immediately, we will we be obliged to use force in order to enter." The voice blared through the windows from a loudspeaker held by an officer below Malik's window. Shortly afterwards, the sound of something heavy slamming against the door made its way up the staircase to the study. The wood splintered, and boot-shod feet tramped across the hall, spreading out across the lowest floor of the house. Another team tramped noisily up the stairs, pausing outside the closed study door. A second later, the portal was kicked violently open, and the black-clad men spread across the wall, their weapons aimed at the grey-haired head of the man sitting at the desk, facing away from them. He did not move an inch. Treading slowly, the leader of the squad made his way to just behind the man, and gently touched his gun to the base of the man's skull. At this slight pressure, the head lolled forwards, and with a noise eerily similar to a sigh, the body of the late Malik Oberon fell forwards, his face flattened against the topmost of the papers before him, the spent pen still clutched in his hand.

Lowering his weapon slowly, the leader of the men stripped off his right glove and touched the man's neck with his forefingers. Exhaling slowly, he straightened up and pushed his dark goggles back from his eyes. "Dead," he proclaimed to his troops. "Simons, sound the all-clear, and let's get out of this dump. Oh, and somebody burn this shit." He waved a hand towards the stacks of paper that surrounded the corpse. "I hate paperwork."
Pens as Contraband. Yeah. I can no longer remember what, if anything, inspired this piece, but I think it came out sort of okay. Once again, I come up with the grain of an idea (In this case it was "Ink as a banned substance" and sort of grow it into a storylet, but it doesn't come out quite how I wanted. I shall have to practise more.
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Zolkabro Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
That's really sad. Never being allowed to put your thoughts down on paper, never being able to write a story, never being able to doodle idly. I couldn't live with that. :-(

Great piece of writing, though. :D
House-full-of-Aces Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
Again, I read this piece and wonder if you will be a writer. Your work is amazing and your too critical of your self learn to relax and write with ease my dear deviant your a writer in mind and heart.
Fironza Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009
Stunning work, the structure and flow of this piece is amazing to read. Really awesome idea, too, very inspiring.

Rezzle Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009
Thank you very much indeed. I'm glad you think it flowed well. I was a little dubious about the pacing of it, though, as I sort of lost my train of thought half way through the piece and came back to it later. Knowing that I managed to splice the two halves together without leaving visible scars is a great relief.
Ginjon-Leprechaun Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
While you don't...what's the word? Deviate? I'll just say submit. While you don't submit work as frequently as most other deviants, when you do it is invariably of such quality and originality that it is pure gold to behold. I applaud you.
Rezzle Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
*takes a bow*
vile-vixen Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
If you wrote a book I would read it like I read the vampire chronicles
Rezzle Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
Those are the ones you really like right? Just making sure. :D
vile-vixen Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
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